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    File: eccomuse_new_logo.png (1.4 MB, 1254x1254)
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    First pic is the logo

    I'm redesigning my site and want to go in the direction of a Frutiger Aero/Skeuomorphism vibe, where, the site currently looks like this: eccomuse.com

    What do you think of the logo, the sidebar that holds the logo and the slide bar? How can i improve it?

    What do you think about the Frutiger metro infographic i made? How can i improve it, if possible, a friend said the color takes away from the background, but i dont think thats a bad thing
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    File: sidebar.png (251 KB, 297x563)
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    this here is the sidebar, with the logo and the slide to unlock
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    File: eccoMuse_setup.png (2 MB, 1920x1200)
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    this is the sidebar and the background wallpaper
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    File: infographic_eccoMuse.png (1.37 MB, 1600x901)
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    and finally this is the infographic in a frutiger metro style
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    >>464444
    epic quads are epic.

    Maybe change the font, its either the typeface or the drop shadow throwing it off imo
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    >>464443
    The placement of the music note should be more in the center of the circle shape formed by the colored lines. The lighting and reflections on the colored lines should match the lighting of the purple circle under them. Logo in the 3rd image can work with that background if it's made smaller but overall I agree with your friend, that background and logo would work better together if the logo was chrome or had a matching palette. The metro infographic combines too many colors and shouldn't use any gradients. you should avoid gradient shading or any kind of shading and limit yourself to a smaller color palette for frutiger metro stuff
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    The note, ring of bars, and circle all need to be aligned to the same center. Right now they disagree and it's jarring.

    The varied lengths of the colored bars in a ring might blend better into the background disc if the background disk had consistent-length insets for each of the bars to sit in. So a ring of 20 recessed bars of equal length that match the disc color, acting as 'grooves' that the colored bars sit in. This suggests the bars are forming some kind of equalizer set to different levels.

    I'd actually try doing 24 recessed bars, and the four at the cardinal positions are empty.
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    >>464443
    Bro, it's an interesting idea and thank god somebody is doing something different, but this looks vibecoded slop almost at it's finest. It is non-responsive too. There are many things to fix. I won't tell you directly because I believe it's important that you learn it by yourself!

    Regarding the design itself though, it looks skeuomorphic but of the low quality type you saw back in the day. Perhaps that's your intention though.
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